so like I guess you could say this is an extremely late birthday present for but yeah I kind of like how this came out, except for the feet, hands, and mouth but yeah bleh Etsumi and UtME belong to art belongs to me
Well, I'd start off with the anatomy, I think it needs work, especially the hands and the face. Not to mention feet. In general, your poses seem awkward and I've jumped to a conclusion that you only know how to properly draw only 1 pose and the rest seems a bit awkward. I'd work on it... Then the coloring. I personally love your hair coloring and your eyes are really cute and all...but the clothes and skin need some work. The skin is too smooth and should get some sharper edges, especially under the fringe and the skirt. The clothes also need a sharper edge. I'm personally not pleased when I see you drawing dark colors, I think you use too much luminosity and it doesn't look right. Don't take me wrong, I really like your art but some things could improve, especially when it comes to the anatomy and shading!
Aaaaah anatomy yeah :'D I do have a lot of trouble with it at times, and yeah the 1 pose thing is pretty true actually no cuz I can;t really draw any poses fully right to be honest LOL And I thought I was supposed to make dark things highlights lighter??? I def work on that, thank you for pointing it out :'D Same for the whole sharper edges things Thank you, I'll def try to work on these! <3
Yeah I've tried the whole sharper edges thing before, but I can never get it to look quite right????? Like it always looks a little uh what's the word wooooonky???????? But yeah X'D I'll try to work on it some more and hopefully get it to turn out right.