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Those who can't cry are weak. by HomuGay Those who can't cry are weak. by HomuGay
so
like I guess you could say this is an extremely late birthday present for :iconyanifruba:
but yeah
I kind of like how this came out, except for the feet, hands, and mouth
but yeah
bleh
Etsumi and UtME belong to :iconyanifruba:
art belongs to me
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:icondudette53084:
If I may, I'd give you a critique. (o w o)
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HomuGay Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sure.
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:icondudette53084:
Well, I'd start off with the anatomy, I think it needs work, especially the hands and the face. Not to mention feet. In general, your poses seem awkward and I've jumped to a conclusion that you only know how to properly draw only 1 pose and the rest seems a bit awkward. I'd work on it...
Then the coloring. I personally love your hair coloring and your eyes are really cute and all...but the clothes and skin need some work. The skin is too smooth and should get some sharper edges, especially under the fringe and the skirt. The clothes also need a sharper edge. I'm personally not pleased when I see you drawing dark colors, I think you use too much luminosity and it doesn't look right.
Don't take me wrong, I really like your art but some things could improve, especially when it comes to the anatomy and shading!
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HomuGay Dec 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aaaaah anatomy yeah :'D
I do have a lot of trouble with it at times, and yeah the 1 pose thing is pretty true
actually no
cuz I can;t really draw any poses fully right to be honest LOL
And I thought I was supposed to make dark things highlights lighter??? I def work on that, thank you for pointing it out :'D
Same for the whole sharper edges things
Thank you, I'll def try to work on these! <3
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:icondudette53084:
You're welcome! I'm glad I could help :3
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HomuGay Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah I've tried the whole sharper edges thing before, but I can never get it to look quite right?????
Like
it always looks a little uh
what's the word
wooooonky????????
But yeah X'D
I'll try to work on it some more and hopefully get it to turn out right.
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:icondudette53084:
Don't lose hope, you can do it :D
try out and experiment!
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HomuGay Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you :'D
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:iconyanifruba:
Pro! Omg Ani ilu this is bootiful tysm ;v;
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HomuGay Dec 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love you too hun thank ; A ;!!!
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